MasterJarri's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Power of Celtic]

This is fucking disgraceful to the original track, Erez Aizen, DJ Jorg, and all of Shiva Space Technology. Don't ever think about making organized sound again you asshole. Also, the original was composed in Impulse Tracker, not FL Studio you fucking piece of shit.

Holy fuck, this sucks, now I'm going to have to replay the original version and try not to hear this shit in my sleep. Also...

Om Namah Shivayah or what the fuck ever YOU FUCKING DICK.

Lashmush responds:

Agreed, what the fuck ever.

[Sungazer (OM)]

Generic Progressive Trance

Not bad but nothing I haven't heard before...

3/5
7/10

Kr1z responds:

Perhaps you could give me some tips on how to bring more variation into the song. I'm out of ideas.

[Hominid [Box-Killa]]

Cool But Kinda Empty

Cool piece you got here, but it's kinda short and a little empty. I think you should extend it, and add some more instruments/effects. Also not use as many presets, the melodies and everything are really cool though. Maybe a little mixing and some reverb on the drums too. Don't mean to be such a critic, but this has much potential and I think you could make it really cool. Either way, nice job. :D

3/5
7/10

Box-Killa responds:

Presets? the only preset i used was the inferno guitar solo. meh you get that. Anyway, yeah i think i missed out on reverb for the drums :( damn oops. Thanks for the review man, i love critics more than i love people that just say ooo i love this its awesome!! :DD

[-[Far From Tonight]-]

Solid But Not Full

Pretty cool track you got here, but there's somethings you should change up to improve it. When the saw kicks in, instead of having it flat-out playing the chords you should've used an arpeggiator and varied it to make it more interesting. The buildup is decent, but you could've spiced it up a bit.

I do really dig the pads though, track overall provokes a dark ambient feeling. I really dig it.

5/5
8/10

japetheape responds:

Thanks for the review! I would go into FL and see how it sounds if I changed up the saw but I don't know which one your talking about, I'm guessing it's the one near the end. The reason the buildup is kind of plain is because I was planning on adding in vocals but decided not to. Anyways, thanks again!